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Different Perspective: The game based short story

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DIFFERENT PERSPECTIVE Based on” every day the same dream game” “No mortal can save my poor soul from this terror except my own move”        I wrote this letter not for my existence, it just my own fashion. It`s hard to know how my face and my heart become so dark. But my mind was developed and it built a weird move in me and strengthen my poor soul.    It was all began 4 days ago, the voice of frying pan woke me up and my clock told me that I was overslept. I hurried myself by taking a bath without masturbating that I did long time ago. Then I dressed myself up and go down stair to take a breakfast.    My wife was there, standing lonely with a simple face that always showed when I went there. I approached her to give her a morning kiss, but she resist my warm greet and she said. “Not now honey, you will be late . . . “ Then I pretended myself to smile and took my lunchbox that she prepared a few minutes ago and took my car key beside ...

Comeback is real!

Hey friends! I am sorry, i really am . . .It`s been a long time since my last post about literary response. I had final exams in my university, and the results was not so good. But it`s fine i will enhance my learning method. Lol Oh! By the way, I am gonna make another short stories, here are my stories planning list : Mannequin Manner : The 17th Case (the second sequel of mannequin manner) Pure Different Perspective Wakerstone`s (mannequin manner character background story) Phillip (mannequin manner character background story) Last will (mannequin manner last sequel) Lifeline I hope you get more interest with my short story. Thank you for your visit. You can contact me via email (muhammadrafely@gmail.com) or via facebook (rafely.ravenstein@facebook.com)

Literary Response: Of Mice and Men by John Steinbeck

Most of sociologist explained that human is Social-Individual being that formed with complex thoughts. From the sentence before, we can see that human needs each other because they have many will, desire or hope that they can`t reach alone. Some of people have a hunch that human relation just a method to reach your will, but some of them also thinks that human relation is way to live. So, Is Friendship worth too much? Or it just a camouflage to reach their own will? John Steinbeck answers those questions in “Of mice and men”. It`s the interesting story about two guys named Lennie and George that traveling together to reach their own will. In their latest destination, they deal with many incidents that wobble their friendship relation.   Through the conflict that happened to Lennie and George, we can see their pure friendship.             The first conflict that happened to them both was when they travel to Soledad. They found a...

Literary Response: Robohnya surau kami by Ali Akbar Navis

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BLINDNESS OF HEART M ahatma Gandhi said that Selfishness is blind, blind to what? Most people said it cause heart blindness. Thanks to Ali Akbar Navis for giving us the answer through his cosmic short story Robohnya surau kami . The story began from narrator`s memories about the faithful old man in the mosque. He was the mosque keeper until he died mysteriously there. Ali Akbar Navis carefully carved the quite complex conflict in the story, makes his theme about selfishness spread widely along the story. In the beginning, the conflict was come from people around kakek (the old man). Kakek gathered money from his Sharpening service, but sometimes people gave him cigarettes, sambal, or a stingy smile with thanks tone. “ Orang-orang perempuan yang minta tolong mengasahkan pisau atau gunting, memberinya sambal sebagai imbalan. Orang laki-laki yang minta tolong, memberinya imbalan rokok, kadang-kadang uang. Tapi yang paling sering diterimanya ialah ucapan terima kasih dan sedikit senyum”. ...

Narrative Text : Mannequin Manner

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M annequin Manner   “Make it stop! Please, make it stop! I can`t hear that anymore. Her scream, her hair . . .” He woke up from his nightmare. He took a long breath and exhaled it slowly. Then he sat and bent his head down while the TV was babbling since his first delusion. “It was 14 years, 14 years ago,” he muttered. “I can`t forget how she was killed. Culprit! If I was brave enough to help her, she might have been saved from that tragedy,” Long in his tragic fantasy, suddenly he heard something. With a faithful face, he said, “Yes, you are right. Thank you for your useless advice,” he looked at the mannequin that stood next to door while he nodded his head. He nearly smiled while he was listening to the voice. With a small period of nod he said. “Just kidding, you are my friend. My best friend, stand by me and be my only friend,” Then he stood facing the mannequin tried to wipe his sadness out. He said. “let`s go to your birthplace,” He brought that pale creature with his sinew...

Literary Response : Everyday Use By Alice Walker

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Characterization Make s Imagination A Literary Response to Alice Walker’s”Everyday Use”                         People have many character and personalities that make people can be a mystery for them also for themselves. Characterization of characters in the story makes us understand the character deeply. If we understand enough, we will be like the character itself, we will comprehend fully about the character, even the characters were the fiction. In this case, Characterization on Alice walker`s “Everyday use” was the successful literary elements, because from characterization we know deeply about the narrator, Maggie, and Dee with just a sprinkle of description words around the text. Characterization is the best literary elements for life reality story because we need to use our emotion to feel the story and also characterization can create foreshadow to characters in the fu...

SPOOF : What The?

WHAT THE?               Once upon a time there was an old man, alone and single of course named Repetto. He felt depressed because he never got any wife in his life. He thought about himself every day, “why no woman in this world that want to marry me? Is it wrong if I collect AKB48 photos? Is it wrong if my hairstyle looked like Elvis Presley?” He muttered. End with that small babbling, he decided to make a wooden wife because he never got any wife in this world. He made his wife with ebony, because ebony looked good in his mind. Time by time he spent to create his wife, and about a week he finish the work.             Repetto happy because his wife was created, but it couldn`t change his loneliness. “My wife still sit in her chair, never move, never greet, and never wash my clothes is that just DOTA that can throw out my loneliness??” he cried. And suddenly SPOOF!! Magic...